Wednesday, May 16, 2018

Tuesday, May 15, 2018

Water Cycle


We have been learning about our water cycle and that woolly mammoths drank.
Years and years ago when people weren't even alive So thats what we have been
working on.

Friday, May 11, 2018

Rubbish Writing





Orientation -
an opening statement that identifies the problem, place, facility and/or defines the topic.
Do you know how much rubbish affects our wildlife and sea.
Animals in the wild and in the sea end up dying because they eat the rubbish that's been left over from humans and their lungs get blocked and then they will think that they are full but their not and they end up dying from starvation.
Body -
points of explanation supported by examples or factual information

(new idea/point = new paragraph - Enter twice and indent (push tab once))
Did you know more than 100,000 mammals and sea animal die a year. More animals keep dying each year because some people don't know that what they are doing is wrong. But thanks to the sea cleaners there helping half of our sea animals and the other half dies. When rubbish gets out to the wild it drys up and splits into little pieces and animals like to eat them because they think also food and because it's shiny.
Ending -
a closing statement that draws the writing to a satisfactory conclusion. For example by summarising the main points
I hope you are satisfied with my writing and you are more careful with animals and sea animals like turtles and other creatures.

Friday, May 4, 2018